Sunday, February 26, 2012
Voki
During the process of recording my reflection on Voki I noticed several things needing to be changed. I noticed that many of my sentences were redundant and just restated information I had already used, just in a different way. While reading my reflection out loud I could hear the way I tried to use too sophisticated wording and ended up making it sound jumbled and unclear. Following that observation I went back in and toned down the wording and rearranged the sentences to be clearer. I also noticed the over use of the word I in many sentences. This required me to restructure those sentences and find a way to represent me in a way that was not I.
During the process of recording my reflection on Voki I noticed several things needing to be changed. I noticed that many of my sentences were redundant and just restated information I had already used, just in a different way. While reading my reflection out loud I could hear the way I tried to use too sophisticated wording and ended up making it sound jumbled and unclear. Following that observation I went back in and toned down the wording and rearranged the sentences to be clearer. I also noticed the over use of the word I in many sentences. This required me to restructure those sentences and find a way to represent me in a way that was not I.
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